Season Eight: Week 16

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This holiday season, give the gift of hope.

Tuesday / December 18 / 2018
Written by Frannie

After a long check-in (good news, bad news, a beautiful poem, and more), one of the women asked why we don’t ever perform the No Fear “translation” of the play. Several women jumped in to give their reasons, which mostly have to do with how much of the original text’s richness is lost that way. “They might be smart, but they get some things wrong,” one woman said about the authors. “If we did a translation, we would have to do it ourselves,” said another woman.

The woman who’d brought it up explained that her concern was really about friends in the audience who’ve had a hard time following the plot and remembering who the characters were. Anonymous surveys each year tell us that the majority of audience members follow along just fine, but we don’t want anyone left out!

The women started throwing out ideas:

  • A prologue to explain the plot and characters? Too time-consuming: we’ve only got 90 minutes, period.

  • A synopsis in the printed program? We’ve done that for years, but it’s too much to read in too little time. We’re going to see if that info can be given to the audience ahead of time this season.

  • A narrator throughout the play? This would also add too much time.

A quiet member raised her hand and floated the idea of having a few zannis doing a “Mystery Science Theater”-style running commentary at points when we feel the audience might get confused. This seems like a great solution, as it fits the concept we’ve already developed and shouldn’t add much time.

A longtime member then said that the audience understands the plays better when the actors are fully committed. She demonstrated by performing nearly all of one of her monologues from last season, which was great! I added that there are techniques we can use in our acting and staging that will help the audience, too—but it’s going to take an even fuller commitment to the work than she’d been talking about. “You can watch any play in any language—” I began, and a newer member piped up, “Or no language!” I nodded. “Or no language!—and still understand it if the artists are doing the work.”

There generally is a bit of a lag in the spring, when rehearsing becomes challenging because people are in and out of the room for various reasons, or they’re absent and we don’t know if/when they’re coming back, or they get busy with other things and “slack” on learning their lines. Just one or two people can affect the entire ensemble this way, and it makes it tough for everyone to give it their all. Our performances are always joyous and uplifting, but they usually don’t reach the full “artistic potential” the ensemble knows they’re capable of achieving.

This year, though, there’s already been a push to up the ante on work ethic and dedication. We’ve recognized that our play requires a lot of physical comedy and prop-work, so we’ve set a much earlier off-book date than usual: we want to have lines memorized in March, three months before performances (and much sooner than even I had suggested!). Attendance has been stellar for most ensemble members, and, as we’ve noted before in this blog, there is an incredible, palpable sense of warmth and enthusiasm for the work and each other.

“So,” I said, “We’ve always done great work, but it sounds like we want to make taking care of the audience a bigger priority this year.” Everyone nodded in agreement. “It’s gonna take even more commitment on our part, then, to bump our performance up to that next level. Are we all in?” We sure are.

What better way to segue into officially staging the first scene of our show? We’d decided to flip the first two scenes, so the play begins with Viola’s arrival in Illyria. We gathered in the house and closed the curtain, talking through basic staging “logic” (for example: making sure locations are clear and consistent) and brainstorming ideas of how we could begin. One woman suggested that Viola, the Captain, and the sailors stumble in from the back of the house and play the scene on the apron and the floor in front of the stage. Great idea!

Then, of course, we started collectively overcomplicating things. How about adding some dialogue for the sailors? some business for the Captain? What order should people enter in? Should the sailors stay or leave? Do they need to be there at all?

The ideas began to stray pretty far from the text, and I called a hold, reminding everyone of an immortal ensemble member quote from last season: “Don’t. Add. Shit. To. Shakespeare.” When we start piling “stuff” on, we obscure the play itself—and we love the play itself! Some goofiness and ad libbing will enhance the piece, but too much will overwhelm it. We backed off of the ideas that seemed extraneous and agreed to “just try” the scene. And, lucky me, I got to be a zanni!

The Captain and one sailor entered through the house left aisle, while another sailor and I, followed by Viola, entered through the right. Right away, the sailor near me “fell” on her face, and, as I struggled to edge my way around her, I burst into exhausted tears. We made our way to the stage, where one sailor knocked water out of her ear and emptied sand from her shoe, while the other picked seaweed off herself, and I continued to cry while fighting off seagulls. Viola and the Captain met in front of the stage, and we bungled our way through the scene. Only at the very end did I realize that Viola had had only one shoe on the entire time.

It was a mess, but we all agreed that there were things to keep and build on. After problem-solving a bit, we tried it again. We sailors kept a lot of the same business, but we were more unified this time. Viola and the Captain were clearer when delivering their lines, so much so that a bunch of us got information from the scene that we’d missed before! And Viola took things a step further by throwing her shoe on the ground at a key moment (though I can’t remember which one!) and getting very excited on her line, “He was a bachelor then!” It was super, super funny, giving us even more ideas, not just for comedy, but for making things clear for the audience and further developing the characters. (It seems that this Captain and these sailors may actually be pirates…)

The standout moment of the final run was definitely when one sailor, totally committed to chasing down some “coins,” dove to the floor and army-crawled under the curtain after them. “Could I please make it through this scene without laughing?” chided the Captain. “It just came over me!” the sailor exclaimed. “I can’t even with this lady!” laughed another woman. “I’m-a send you some Bengay!”

Friday / December 21 / 2018
Written by Matt

One of our new members talked during check-in today about being “thrown off” by a new face in her unit. “You can’t steal my Shakespeare sunshine!” she said to the newcomer. “I think you found your calling,” suggested another relative newcomer. “I think so, too!” was the reply.

To start out, we ran through the ensemble’s goofy performance piece again. Predictably, it was pretty rough after a week of neglect. A couple of the veterans started whipping people into shape! One of the women who was observing the process leaned over to a friend and whispered, “She’s such a director,” pointing at one of the ringleaders.

After running through it until it went smoothly, we picked up again at the top of the play (Act 1, scene 2, which is our opening). It was just as funny as it was last time, and there were just a few notes, including a really good one given by one of our longtime members about making sure that the sailors, who add a lot of slapstick energy to the scene, were helping tell the story instead of just goofing around.

Up next was Act 1, scene 1, and right away we could feel that it was going to be good! Our Orsino got the idea that her throne would be comically high for her--she’s short, and the “throne” was a stack of plastic chairs--so, when the curtain opened, she was struggling to jump up into her seat. She’s got great instincts and a clear voice, so she was able to shout and whine with gusto, even rolling around on the floor. By the end, everyone was laughing. “I knew you’d be a good Orsino!” shouted a woman from the audience.

“I feel like you portrayed a pathetic guy who’s in love with someone,” said a veteran, “and there’s no hope.” Then, she gently nudged our Orsino to keep the energy but make sure the audience could hear and understand what’s going on. Another praised Orsino for her decisions: “I love how you were venting to the musicians like they’re your best friends!”

On a second run-through--just as funny as the first, and more disciplined--the same woman who had praised venting to the musicians noted that we weren’t using levels very well. She demonstrated how to create visual interest by consciously mixing up who is sitting, standing or kneeling at any given time.

As Valentine, I was planning on providing a serious foil to Orsino’s over-the-top emotional delivery. However, the woman playing Curio gave such a beautifully dry performance that I realized I could never top it. On a whim, I bolted out of the door and went over-the-top, like Orsino. After the scene was over, I mentioned that my entrance had been a last-minute decision, inspired by Curio. “I saw her and I thought, ‘Man, I cannot out-deadpan that!’”

On the third run-through, it was even crazier! There’s still a lot of polishing to do, but it was pretty close to where we’ve wanted it to be. We had to hurry to wrap up before our time was over, but it was really encouraging. The lesson of this season has always been to get out of our heads and just do it! Today was no exception.

Season Eight: Week 15

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This holiday season, give the gift of hope.

Tuesday / December 11
Written by Frannie

Tonight was our casting session! We began by reviewing the method we’d landed on: a group discussion in which we’d cast each other, everyone would be honest about what she did and did not want to play, and we’d focus on the overall fit of the ensemble rather than satisfying any one person’s ego. But we’d look out for each other! “Don’t be intimidated just because someone strongly wants a part,” said a longtime member. “Stick up and fight for it!”

Disclaimer: I’m going to use aliases in this entry for clarity’s sake, and because it can be done in a way that does not identify any individual.

“How do we want to start?” I asked the group. After a brief pause, Jane said that she saw Martha playing Orsino. The group agreed, but Annie said she saw her even more so playing Maria. All were also agreed on that, and Cathy said, “She could play anything!”

Martha said she felt great about both characters, but turned the spotlight on Julia, who used to be very quiet but has recently been much more active. “When you got on stage, it’s like you had always done Shakespeare. It was like the Power Rangers!” said Martha to a lot of laughter. “She got up on stage, and it was like… It’s morphin’ time!”

“It’s this group,” said Julia. “If it wasn’t for this group being so supportive, I don’t know if I could ever have done that.” She said that she had feel great reading Maria, though she also enjoyed Olivia. We left it open for the time being. Another person said that Jane was the perfect Sir Toby, which everyone agreed with, hands down. Though Jane worried about the number of lines, we assured her that they could be cut down, and when no one else voiced interest in the role, we went ahead and set it in stone. The group broke into spontaneous applause, which recurred throughout the evening whenever casting was set. It made for some very exciting energy that did not let up!

Martha then turned to Kristen, gently saying, “I have a question for you. You hardly ever speak. Were you thinking about a medium role, or… what?” This is a really lovely feature of this ensemble: no one is ever unnoticed or left behind. Kristen replied that she didn’t care about the size of the role, but she’d prefer something more serious; when asked to explain that, she simply replied that it wouldn’t be “as big of a leap.” The group took this seriously, verified that the roles they thought were serious seemed that way to her, and then left that open, too.

Next, Martha suggested that Elizabeth would be a good Viola. Surprised, Elizabeth replied, “That’s an interesting suggestion because you never said it before.” She’d never even performed Viola, though we all agreed that she’d be a good fit for a lot of reasons. She said she didn’t necessarily object, but she felt more pulled toward Olivia. Leaving that for the time being, we quickly determined that everyone wanted Courtney to have the role we all knew she wanted: Feste. Though there were others who’d play the part well, they didn’t want it badly enough to take it from her—particularly because she has always incorporated unabashedly silly dancing. Applause!

“Speaking of dancing,” Jane slyly said, “Annie really has a knack.” We burst out laughing, recalling the crazy dance moves Annie has explored as Sir Andrew. Annie agreed that she enjoys that character, but that she also gravitates toward Malvolio. “I really want to see her in yellow stockings,” said Martha. “I kinda wore the yellow today for that,” laughed Annie, who was wearing a yellow jacket.

Someone else pointed out, though, that the chemistry between Sir Toby and Sir Andrew is really important, and no team has clicked like Annie and the Sir Toby we’d already cast. “I do think we make an awesome team,” said Jane, our Sir Toby. “You’re just so willing to jump into anything.” Annie nodded, musing, “They’re such different characters, but I love them both.”

“What about you, Cathy?” said another woman. “Oh, no!” laughed Cathy. “I want something goofy, but that’s just too many lines!” Perhaps Fabian, we agreed, or maybe Antonio. I volunteered that I thought a woman who wasn’t in the room would be a fabulous Malvolio because she’s got a unique energy that would suit the part, and she’d told us earlier that she would be comfortable with it.

The conversation continued on this way, till we had suggestions for nearly every role. It was time to make decisions. A few fell easily into place, and then Elizabeth turned to Martha and said, “I don’t know why you put me up for Viola. I think you should play that part.” Martha hesitated, reminding us that she was just fine playing any role. I said, “You’re really feeling Viola, though, aren’t you? You were the first person to dig into the character, and you seem really connected.” She smiled and said, “All right, you got me. I am really feeling Viola. She’s a different sort of character for me, which would be kinda exciting.” Decided, then: she’s playing the role. And she is tickled BRIGHT pink about it.

She turned to Julia and said, “So what about it? Olivia or Maria? You can’t put on a performance like that and expect people to ignore it.” Julia smiled and said that, after thinking about it more, she felt a little more connected to Olivia than Maria because she doesn’t like being “the ringleader.” Martha nodded slowly and said, “So what you’re saying is, you’re more comfortable playing Olivia?” She raised an eyebrow, and Julia said, “You’re saying Maria would be more of a challenge because she’ll take me out of my comfort zone… And that might be better for me. You’re right. I want a challenge.” Boom. Cast.

Nearly all of the other pieces quickly and neatly fell into place. Annie decided to take Julia’s lead and play Sir Andrew because it would be more of a challenge than Malvolio! The woman we cast as Malvolio had been at another program for part of our session, and when she came back, Julia turned to her and exuberantly said, “Nice to meet you, Malvolio! I’m Maria!” Our Malvolio laughed, shrugged her shoulders, and said, “Okay, great! Nice to meet you all!”

A couple of people were absent, and one woman who was present hadn’t naturally fallen into any character. A few roles were still open, and they weren’t the ones she’d been interested in. A little disappointed, but not despondent, she said she’d take a look at them and check back in with us on Friday.

We spent the rest of our time talking through the next steps in our process: editing the script, staging scenes, and taking time to do some exercises that will help develop our characters. I’m thrilled with how this process went: it was among our most harmonious yet, and it took the least time of any casting session we’ve had. Normally this takes the entire session, but tonight it took less than an hour and a half. It speaks to how well these ensemble members take care of each other. It’s just fantastic.

Friday / December 14
Written by Matt

Today was one of my favorite sessions of SIP ever, but it will be a little hard to write about. There were great strides made by several of our members, and the collaborative work done by the entire ensemble was really something to watch, but some of the things that were most meaningful to observe will make little sense written out. I’ll try, though: today’s meeting was exuberant--those women were firing on all cylinders!

The problem is unavoidable. On this blog, we try to document the successes and struggles not only of the program, but of individual ensemble members. We try, as much as possible, to let their words, their ideas, and their work drive the narrative that you read here. That’s as it should be, but there are limits: we don’t mention anything that could be used to identify one of our members, and we don’t publish sensitive or personal conversations here. And since we don’t use names or pseudonyms, there’s no way you could track one particular woman’s path by reading this blog. Since they are all “a woman” or “an ensemble member” here, it would be impossible even for an obsessive reader of the blog (we know there are a few of you!) to know that the woman who was withdrawn and wary in September was the same person who began opening up during a couple of the exercises and found by April that she was actually a powerful leader. We try to mention when someone has undergone that type of transformation (“a woman who rarely speaks up,” or some such), but that’s not the same as watching that person, whom we know, transform.

I mention this because the aspects of tonight’s session that made it so remarkable were those that are hardest to describe without going into the personality of each of the women involved. So, if today’s blog feels a little bit vague or like it’s skimming the surface, that’s because it is! Here goes...

We got in late today. I hate when we arrive even a few minutes late, but today was not as long a delay as sometimes happens. When we arrived, the women were already in the auditorium, working on something. As we walked in, they greeted us but were clearly involved in whatever they were doing. When they came to a stopping point, we all gathered up, standing in a circle for a short check in (all good things today!), before one of our members revealed that she and some of the others had been cooking up a plan for a goofy performance piece that looked like a lot of fun, even if it had only a tiny (read: infinitesimal) connection to Twelfth Night or Shakespeare. After we lowered the ring, a glance around the ensemble was all it took to confirm that they all wanted to work on putting together this act tonight--we’d deal with Twelfth Night later. This was fine with us; sometimes, you need a break, even from Shakespeare!

Immediately, a few of the veterans were all over organizing the group and coming up with ideas. More specifically, they each took on slightly different roles based on their strengths. One was the ringleader, overseeing the big-picture concept, accepting or rejecting ideas, and helping loop everyone in. One was problem-solving the details while another was keeping track of logistics. A fourth was throwing herself into every decision, no matter how goofy it looked, which gave others permission to do the same--and at the same time, she was checking to make sure the women had gone over each step enough times to get it in their heads. After a few minutes, another returning member entered as an “ideas woman,” coming up with all sorts of silly moves, then applying her perfect comedic timing to coaching others on how to copy her.

Immediately, a couple of the new folks threw themselves in. One was all around the periphery, encouraging people and talking them up, especially the new, shy members. Another, who had been really quiet and reserved until recently, was spitting out ideas for brilliantly silly rhymes more quickly than the others could keep track. She was especially good at working out the second line of a couplet, so that it rhymed, made sense, and was seriously funny (“That’s my girl!” hollered one of the veterans). By now, the whole ensemble was actively involved, fitting into a role that suited her

After an hour of strategizing, they were ready to run the first part through. Almost instantly, it fell apart. “Well,” said the woman who had taken on the ringleader role, “that didn’t work!” Another mused aloud, “We must look like idiots.” The woman next to her muttered, “Yeah, really.” A third added, “At least we’re fun idiots!” They went over the moves again simplifying and adding new people in. A couple of the newest members got looped in and given roles suiting their characters--one shy, one who’s a bit of a showboat. The ringleader nodded approvingly. “We buffing this thing out,” she said.

At last, they put the entire performance together. It was hilarious and naturally involved everyone equally--no one sat it out, which is saying something this year! To be sure they had it, they ran through it a few more times. After the last time, everyone collapsed into laughter, and Frannie, Lauren, and I joined the round of applause, which was the first input we had given during the entire process. Today really was about the pleasure of observing a really amazing, talented group of women create something out of nothing.

Just before we left, one of the women caught the ringleader of today’s antics staring absently up towards the ceiling. “You’re such a cheeseball,” she ribbed. The other woman replied, dreamily, “I’m just looking up at the ring.”

Then our logistics expert announced that they had to run through the whole performance one more time to get it set in everyone’s minds, so the women scrambled to places to squeeze one more run in before we had to put on our jackets and walk out into the night.

Season Eight: Week 14

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This holiday season, give the gift of hope.

Tuesday / December 4
Written by Frannie

Check-in tonight started off kind of silly, with someone sharing her discovery that She’s the Man is an adaptation of Twelfth Night (“Well, I never thought I’d say this, but I’ve really got to check out that Amanda Bynes movie!”). Still in this light-hearted mode, one of the women shared that she’d been asked to write her “Oscar acceptance speech” as an exercise in another group, and what she wrote took her a bit by surprise.

“Frannie,” she said, “you should know you were like 85% of it. More than God!” We all laughed, but she was clear that, though she was joking about me being more important than God, she was serious about the rest of it. “I never realized I could grow as a person,” she said, eyes locked with mine, not letting me off the hook (as she never has). “I never realized that I had a future. I didn’t know that I had a future before, and now I know I do. I owe so much to Shakespeare in Prison. If I was given this much in a few years, how much more could I grow?” She said some other very lovely things as well, none of which I wrote down because I was focused on listening AND somehow keeping it together (the first of which, I did, and the latter of which, I… sort of did). I’ve known this woman for a long time—long enough to have seen this incredible change in her—and, while I will never take credit for the work she’s done, she’s (repeatedly) forced me to take credit for the work I’ve done with her. I told her I didn’t have the words to respond in that moment, so I simply thanked her. And told her she was a jerk for making me cry!

After check-in, we circled up to do some rhythm exercises from Theatre of the Oppressed. We began with a simple rhythm circle: one person at a time jumped into the middle and everyone else copied her movement/vocalization until she “challenged” the next person to lead. This was a lot of fun for all, though it was more comfortable for some than others. “Trying to think of what to do is uncomfortable,” said one woman. Aha—we’d run into overthinking yet again!

But it wasn’t only that. Even those copying the leader had a tough time fully committing. “What made some of these easier than others?” I asked. There were a few factors at play, we agreed. First of all, the catchier, louder rhythms were simpler to catch onto. And, as in the Mirrors exercise, the more dramatic physical motions proved challenging for many of us. That hesitation to commit to big movements is something we need to own as an ensemble so we can both accept the challenge and see what we can do to overcome it.

What it came down to, said one woman, was that the more confident the leader was, the better things worked overall. This was true across the board: one person’s confidence buoyed that of everyone else. That is also something we need to own.

“How come I always forgot my own movements?” said one woman, half-joking. We concluded that there hadn’t been anything “wrong” about what she’d done, she’d just made up such complicated rhythms that she couldn’t remember what they were! “Nobody overcomplicates things the way I do,” said another woman.

So: the vulnerability of making large physical movements is uncomfortable for us, and we overthink/overcomplicate things—but if just one of us is confident, she can bring the rest of us along with her. Awesome. Good to know.

Next, we set out to make a rhythm machine, in which a series of people add complementary rhythms until the Joker (that was me) ups the tempo and then lowers it till the machine stops. The group organically formed a circle, and the combined rhythms became almost hypnotic. I hated to make them stop! Afterward, people started laughing and sharing all at the same time. “Wait, wait, wait!” I shouted above the din. “We want to hear from everyone! How did that feel?”

“Amazing! It was amazing!” said one woman. Another said that she hadn’t intended on joining the circle, but then it looked and sounded so cool that she couldn’t resist. We did a little analysis on why it had worked so well, and then we moved on to make a rhythm machine centered in an emotion. We chose love.

A new member volunteered to start, but we quickly got off-rhythm and had to stop, regroup, and start over with “Love Machine 2.0.” It turned out that people had a wide variety of feelings about love, with some sighing dreamily while others grunted or growled or whined. “People feel differently about love!” one woman joked afterward. We all agreed that that had been enlightening, but the machine itself hadn’t worked all that well. We determined that the main issue had been that people had been so eager to jump in that they hadn’t really listened before doing so, and that had made it nearly impossible for everyone to stay together.

For the final part of the exercise, we made a Malvolio machine! The woman who began stomped her feet and said, “Uh uh uh!”; the next person heaved and whined, another person shushed everyone else, and on and on for several minutes.

This was our favorite and proved far more enlightening than any of us had anticipated. For one thing, we had had an “in” here because we knew the character. It turned out, though, that we got to know Malvolio better through this exercise because we got to see and hear so many interpretations of him (or aspects of him). “I was thinking of Capitano,” said one woman, referencing the character from Commedia dell’Arte. “I was trying to think of what Malvolio wants to be, and ordering people around.” We could have talked for 45 minutes or more and still not gotten from each other what we did through the machine. We concluded that we should do this for every character, and maybe for every scene. At the very least, we’re going to see what happens if we make a machine when we hit a creative wall; we think it’ll be a good, invigorating way of figuring things out.

We decided to put the scene in which Malvolio is tricked by Maria’s letter on its feet. No one wanted to read Malvolio, so I gave it a go. As we moved through the scene, it became apparent that, while it will eventually be very funny, it needs some cuts—and for someone other than me to play Malvolio! Still, there were moments that worked: the box-trees kept following me around, and the group liked when I came into the audience, showed someone the letter, and then improvised chastising them for not being helpful. There were many more ideas for shtick with the box-trees and ways of using the entire stage and the house.

“What is the difference between Malvolio finding this cruel letter, and Viola dressing up as Cesario and Olivia falling in love with her?” pondered one woman. “I feel like the level of deception is the same.” Are the motivations different, though, we asked? She shrugged. “I see both situations the same. Maybe this scene is more emotional.” This led to a brief conversation about how she’s totally right—this is a very cruel trick to play—but the scene is also intended to be funny, and we need to restrain ourselves from telegraphing the extent to which this plot will go, or we’ll ruin the “gut-punch” we want later in the play.

The conversation turned to casting, and we decided to take one more night to explore the play—choosing very short pieces of scenes and letting people play as many characters as possible—before sticking to our plan of casting next Tuesday. I cautioned everyone to be honest with themselves and others about what’s realistic in terms of casting: whose workload is too heavy for a lot of lines? who has to be absent often enough that it’ll interfere with rehearsal? who may just not be ready for a “big” role? “Some are born great,” I said, “Some achieve greatness… and some ensemble members have greatness thrust upon them and freak out and leave the group!”

One woman let us know that she’d had a talk with her boss to let them know she’d be with us each Tuesday and Friday. She had warned us last week that this job might interfere with her participation, and I asked her how the conversation had gone. “Fine,” she said. “They just have to accept it, is all, and they know it. This is a part of my life. Just like my religion and brushing my teeth, Shakespeare is a part of my life. This gives me a sense of purpose, and I’m committed.” The others agreed. “Everyone knows not to question me about [Shakespeare] anymore. They used to be like, ‘Oh, you’re going to [sneering] Shakespeare?’ No more of that,” said one woman as the others nodded.

The woman who started the conversation said, “Life before Shakespeare—” she gave a thumbs down and a “downward” sound with her voice. Another woman gasped in mock indignation and said, “[NAME], that’s cruel. Who wants to think about life before Shakespeare?” A woman in her third season said, “I literally can’t think of what I used to do on Tuesdays and Fridays.”

The woman who’d been “indignant” put her hand on her heart, saying, “It’s like… my chest is caving in, thinking about it.” The first woman shook her hands as if getting something gross off of them and said, “I just try not to think about it.”

Friday / December 7
Written by Matt

Tonight, the energy in the room was really positive from the beginning. Three of the women shared that the Prison Creative Arts Project selected their work for its annual show. This always gives a great boost, and it was awesome to have so many this year!

We took that energy and put it right into our work. As we decided on Tuesday, we tried out short (30 seconds to a minute) bits of scenes, which allowed lots of people to read for lots of characters. Alas, Frannie and I couldn’t pick them out beforehand--we stopped bringing our copies of Twelfth Night with us when we realized that we could just use the ones that sit in our box of resources at the prison! There was some chaos as Frannie and Maria (who is a bona fide stage manager!) picked out representative moments from scenes and everyone else tried to figure out which characters they might be interested in. Frannie and I had made up a rough, preliminary list of which women were interested in or might be good in each role. We read it aloud, but few of them spoke up to change anything about it. To make matters worse, the little scenes, or “sides,” naturally fell on different pages in our two editions of the play--and often on different lines. Maria, who is quite literally a pro, scrambled to cross-reference, but we spent a few minutes trying to figure out what was going in.

When we finally got going, though, the energy we had built at the beginning of the meeting carried through to the performances. The first side was from Act I, scene ii, which will likely open our version of the play, with a veteran playing Viola and a new member playing the captain. Both of them brought some style to their performances, with the first woman being a strong anchor for the second.

Another core ensemble member showed off her dance moves in a hilarious rendition of the end of Act I, scene iii, as Sir Toby goads Sir Andrew into ever-sillier dances. Her “caper” was a bouncy modern dance, her “back-trick” morphed into the robot. The cinquepace (or “sink-apace”) saw her trying and failing to breakdance on the floor, then she flopped around in a valiant effort to do the worm when commanded to perform a “galliard.” This was all impressively committed (what with the salt and general winter muck, the floor was not exactly pristine), and the two women challenged each other to take the energy higher during the scene. Two other women stepped up to try the same scene, and they brought a totally different energy to it. Sir Toby was somehow both lethargic and impish, instructing Sir Andrew to do various dances with a wink. This Sir Andrew did not throw herself on the floor, but she capered ably--so ably that Sir Toby broke character. After a too-lengthy pause, she pointed at the dancing woman’s feet and said, “Oh! I was… distracted.” As she left the stage, though, she said of Sir Toby, “He’s my alter ego. He’s my… spirit animal!”

The next side, which came from Act I, scene v, showcased a totally different cast of women. In the moments we played, the fool, Feste, is trying and failing to best Maria at wordplay. The first pair had had their sights set on those characters for a long time. The woman who read for Feste brings huge vivacity to the role, where the woman who read for Maria had nearly opposite energy: sharp, precise, and impatient. The scene was great, and part of what made it so exciting was the performance of Maria. She has mostly hung back so far this season, which is her first. She has read aloud and even jumped into reading some scenes, but not with the same sense of purpose and self-direction with which she strode up to the stage to play Maria. Paired with a woman whose Feste is boisterous and bold, she was able to root her feet to their place on the floor and give the lines an edge that was true to the character and totally her.

Afterwards, the woman playing Feste complimented her scene partner and said that she liked the way she had played Maria. She liked it so much she wanted to switch roles and try it that way. They agreed, and leapt right into the same lines with the roles reversed. It was clear by the end why they had chosen their first characters, but the former Feste played a feisty Maria, and the former Maria--despite her usual reticence--gamely leapt into the role of the fool.

Perhaps emboldened by that performance, two new members jumped in to read it again. The scene changed completely in their hands. The Feste was less performative, more intent on making jokes, and the Maria was more actively annoyed, almost angry, and moved quite a bit more than the first woman to read that role. After they were done, they had cracked each other up so much that they also decided to switch roles, which gave yet another twist on the scene. Both of these women, though they are brand-new to the group (they started partway into this season) have a great feel for the language of Shakespeare, flowing naturally with its rhythms, which is fun to watch. When they were done, a longtime member praised the performances and very gently reminded them to keep their bodies opened to the audience “so we can see and hear you.”

We read another moment from Act I, scene v and a very short bit from Act II, scene i (“Wait! I feel like I got cheated!” exclaimed one woman after finishing). Highlights were another command performance by our new member who is interested in Olivia, a brilliant, over-the-top gesture of going down on one knee with arms extended by a woman reading for Antonio, and general hilarity by both Malvolios in our final scene of the night, from Act II, scene v.

We were having so much fun that everyone (including me!) forgot to look at the time until we only had a few minutes left to gather our things, put up the ring, and scurry out of the room.

Season Eight: Week 13

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This holiday season, give the gift of hope.

Tuesday / November 27
Written by Frannie

After a rousing game of Twizzle, we grabbed our books and continued our walk-through with Act II, scene i, in which we meet Sebastian and Antonio. The first two women to read struggled a bit through the scene—one is very new to the work, and the other had had an upsetting day—but we still gleaned something from their work! The woman who read Sebastian asked if it had been okay that she’d started yelling a bit. “He’s angry, right?” she said. “Just distressed, I think,” replied another woman. The first woman read over her book, a little puzzled. “There were shouting moments to me,” she said. “I just got this feeling like he had a lot of harshness in his words… He’s venting. He’s definitely venting.” We agreed that the language is blunt, and the feeling of anger—or at least frustration—wasn’t off the mark.

The woman who read Antonio shrugged and said, “I didn’t really put much into it. Sorry.” I thanked her for reading anyway—it gave us something to build on—and I asked the others if they’d learned anything new. One woman mused, “Antonio reminds me of a girl who’s getting broke up with, and grabs onto the guy’s leg and won’t let him leave. ‘Please don’t leave me!’” That struck a chord with all of us, and we asked her to read the part, with another particularly hammy ensemble member reading Sebastian.

It was so, so funny—and so sweet. Antonio followed Sebastian (who was oblivious) around like a puppy, sighing, wiping tears, and eventually reaching out as Sebastian exited, only to pull her hand in toward herself when the gesture proved futile. As we all laughed and applauded, I said, “So, wait… I can’t remember. Did you say you’ve done this kind of thing before? Like, theatre, but not Shakespeare?” She shrugged and said, “No, I’ve never done anything remotely like this before.” Many of us shook our heads in disbelief. “I will tell you what,” I said, “You’ve got great instincts. I mean, we all have great instincts because we’re all humans, but you’ve really got a flair for the dramatic! Don’t ever doubt that you’re good at this—because you’re really good at it!” She beamed and immediately volunteered to read Malvolio in the next scene.

We breezed through that one and into the next. Act II, scene iii, is fairly long and complicated, with late-night partying, drinking, singing, dancing, whining, Malvolio as the ultimate wet blanket, and the beginnings of Maria’s plot against him.

The scene got off to a very frothy start, with light-hearted banter between Sirs Toby and Andrew, followed by the entrance of Feste and their entreating her to sing for them. Upon agreeing to do so, Feste suddenly pulled a maraca out from under her sweatshirt, using it as both an instrument and microphone. The rest of us cracked up to the point that I lost track of where we were in the scene. At that point, Matt entered through one of the doors as Maria, unconsciously delivering the line, “What a caterwauling!” in a way that brought to mind Elizabeth Taylor in Who’s Afraid of Virginia Woolf? (“What a dump!”). When a very petite Malvolio entered, yelling shrilly and stomping her feet, Sir Andrew fell to the floor laughing, where she remained for at least a solid minute until Feste and Sir Toby helped her up. When those three started singing toward the end of the scene, I suddenly had a vision of something that this Feste had mentioned during check-in—a “girl group” she had led as a teenager (they got hung up on when they called an agent). I could barely contain myself, it was so serendipitous and funny, and I scribbled it down on my notepad even as I whispered to another ensemble member.

The debrief after this scene was just delightful, with all of us sharing feedback and a number of great ideas that were sparked. I brought up the possibility of cutting Feste’s first song (of three)—we’ve got to do the show in under 90 minutes, and this seemed like low-hanging fruit—and most of the women thought it could go. But one woman resisted. She thought the song was important because Feste uses it to prophecy the play’s events, and that’s a valid point. Another woman, though, said she thought that it was pretty subtle from an audience perspective and it could easily be missed. “It’s like those movies: you watch, then you watch it again, and you’re like, ‘Ohhhhh! Clever!’” We agreed to leave the decision till later, when we’ll have a better idea of whether or not we need the song.

Someone brought up casting. “I get asked at least once a week who I’m going to be,” said one woman. “When you tell them, they still won’t know,” joked a longtime member. We talked through the process a bit and decided to stick with what worked last year: I’ll gather everyone’s role preferences, and we’ll talk it out from there. I mentioned that I really thought this casting process—which we decided would happen in two weeks—would be easy, and several heads nodded as one woman said, “The group right now seems really open.” A longtime member emphatically agreed. “This is one of my favorite years,” she said. “I’m feeling the play. I’m feeling the ensemble.”

“We’re on fire!” said another longtime member. Though the start of the season was rocky, we’ve come to a point where we understand each other better, and we know now that this is an ensemble full of warm, nurturing, compassionate people. And, because of this, the more hesitant members of the group are really starting to come out of their shells. We feel solid as a group now. That’s a really good place to be as we tough out the holiday season, cast the show, and prepare to welcome some new members in January.

Friday / November 30
Written by Matt

Circus Tricks! Today’s first exercise was guaranteed to get a lot of laughter and energy going. To play Circus Tricks, one member of the group introduces another as “the fabulous/amazing/notorious/whatever” and announces that she will “perform an amazing/death-defying/shocking/unbelievable feat of…” and adds something completely ordinary: touching her ear, standing on one foot, or whatever. The person who was introduced then performs that “feat,” making it look as difficult as possible, as the crowd cheers her on. It’s a funny game, but also remarkably good at making people feel good about themselves--there’s something about having fifteen people cheering for you that brings good vibes, even if you’re just tapping your left toe with the sole of your right foot!

The group today dove right into it, performing such awe-inspiring feats as:

  • Bending over and touching toes

  • Turning and looking to the left (a shout from the audience: “Oh my God, I saw her in Beijing!!!”)

  • Patting the top of the head (“Oh, she can’t do that!”)

  • The hokey-pokey (this was Lauren’s feat, and she definitely made it feel like something out of Rocky Horror Show)

  • Flipping hair (This was mine. “I didn’t even see this on YouTube!” hollered one woman)

  • Touching the index finger with the thumb.

  • Picking up a plastic chair (“She crazy! She’ll do anything!”)

  • Doing a jumping jack (“I’ve never seen anything like that before!”)

  • Doing a Twizzle (“I’m--the Twizzler!” When she was done, another woman assured her that she’d get an IcyHot pack ready. For bonus points, check out Twizzle on last week’s blog!)

  • Raising only the middle toe (truly death-defying for most of us, but it is a special talent of the woman indicated)

  • Skipping across the stage

  • Pantomiming a tight-rope walk.

At the end, everyone was laughing as we debriefed. “My energy level is up!” exclaimed one woman. “I love games like this because I know they can hear us out in the hall,” said another, gesturing out the door of the auditorium, “and they all think we’re weird!”

We moved on to Act II, scene iv, and a bunch of enthusiastic new members were up first. This is one of those scenes that have given us trouble. It’s got a lot of complexity to it, and some really difficult work for Viola, who has to keep up her deception to Orsino, while also making clear to the audience that she has fallen in love with him.

It happened that our Viola today was playing a female character for the first time. This sometimes happens because of a preference on the part of the ensemble member, but more often simply by accident (there are far fewer female characters). She brought great energy to her performance, which was met by Feste, who broke into full-voice singing in the middle of the scene! Actually, the melody she invented for the song was really sad, and the juxtaposition was unexpectedly touching.

It took a few moments for our Orsino to find her footing in the text, but by the end of the scene, she was making natural gestures along with the language. She insisted afterwards that she had no idea what she was talking about, but it was amazing to see how clearly the language worked through her anyway. She tried to apologize, but none of the women would let her finish. Our longest-serving member told her not to worry about, that it takes time, and it will happen faster than she thinks. Another, who is new, said that she doesn’t know what she’s saying half of the time, but she usually gets it if she sticks with it.

Viola asked about her line, “I am all the daughters of my father’s house.” What was it really about? Wouldn’t Orsino understand that she was a woman from that line? A veteran member nodded, saying that Orsino may be too oblivious to understand the import of the words, but “This is where the audience is gonna know.” Another woman chimed in: “Yeah! This is where she’s slipping.” Then she continued, “But she’s got to act the male role, too.”

Viola chimed in again to suggest that the stage had been too empty, that Orsino needed more distractions around. “The more there is going on around Orsino, the clearer it will be that Viola is focused on him,” she said, to general agreement.

Frannie suggested reading the final moments between Orsino and Viola “straight”--not going for laughs at all. The new Viola and Frannie, as Orsino, fed off the pathos of the scene while sitting on the steps downstage. The approach worked, sparking a conversation about the emotional core of the play and the characters.

The previous Orsino said, impressed, “I totally read it as nonchalant, and you read it as--like, actually consoling each other.” Frannie nodded. “That’s why we experiment,” she said. “Follow the language.”

“I like that part as quiet,” said one of the women. “After everybody leaves, the stage gets so much smaller.” A veteran member who had been quietly observing and taking notes, chimed in, “I feel like the way we could play this is: she’s a woman underneath, and maybe she sits a certain way, then has to check herself. And she’s saying all these deep words, but she can’t go all in.”

As usual, she hit the nail on the head, and others started having ideas that sprung from that one. “The irony, too!” exclaimed one woman. “What if she doesn’t love you? You have to accept it--because I have to accept it, too.” She noted that the next scene is completely slapstick and hilarious. “Yeah,” agreed another woman. “The whole play does that back and forth.”

Frannie mentioned that she had found a place of empathy for Orsino. Other than being played for laughs, she asked, what actually separates him from Hamlet, or Romeo? Always willing to pick a bone, a longtime member shot back, “Well, I haven’t read Hamlet, so I can’t argue with you. But stay tuned!” Back to Orsino: “He romanticizes romance,” suggested a new member. The first woman agreed, saying, “He’s vulnerable. He’s vulnerable.”

Another woman took us in a slightly different direction, musing, “I feel like [Malvolio] is desperate, too. Desperate for money and power, not for love… Everybody knows this guy. He works 90 hours a week. He bags his lunches. He never buys a new car because he wants to save on the payments and insurance. But it’s never clear what he saving for.” She talked a bit about the scene in which Malvolio is locked in a dark room. “I totally empathize with Malvolio. I’ve been there: ‘I’m not crazy. These things happened to me! I am not crazy!’” A lot of the ensemble members nodded along. “Yeah, I get that,” chimed in another woman. “I laugh when I tell stories about by childhood, and people always wondering, ‘Why you laughing? That’s horrible.’ But I guess that’s how I deal with them.”

A woman who had mostly watched quietly piped up: “Orsino feels like he can get anything he wants… He says no woman could ever feel like him. He’s entitled.”

Another woman offered another interpretation. “What if what he’s saying is, ‘No heart is big enough to love me?”

Season Eight: Week 12

Tuesday / November 20
Written by Frannie

A couple of ensemble members shared some great stuff during check-in tonight! One woman was involved in the groundbreaking for the new Vocational Village, which is very exciting, and we were glad to have her perspective on the event. Then she said, “And then the governor spoke… and guess which program he mentioned by name?”

“No way,” I said, and the others started to smile. Beaming, she continued, “Yep. ‘This facility has many great programs, including the wonderful Shakespeare program.’” As regular readers of this blog know, I tend to get a little loopy when something exciting happens, and this generally involves throwing whatever I’m holding on the floor. That is what happened in this moment, as I yelled, “SHUT UP!” She laughed and nodded. There may have been further shouting and pacing… and maybe a little dancing… on my part before we could move on.

Rest assured, I was far from the only one who was excited. We’ve all worked really hard over the years to make our program a trusted, valuable asset to WHV and MDOC—most ensemble members have been fiercely protective of it and have worked side-by-side with me to make the program run as best we can—and this endorsement, while casual, from the top-ranking official in our state is astonishing. It validates all that hard work and growth, and it makes visible to those outside this “world” that an arts program can be one that stands out in a prison community of more than 2,000 people.

Once I’d settled down, we moved on. One ensemble member happily shared that she’s been communicating with her mother every day, which is a very new thing in their relationship. “I’m getting to know her, and it’s making me a better person,” she said. She’s been communicating with other people in her life whom she feels need to move on from the past, as she’s working on doing. “I don’t feel sorry for people no more,” she said. “I believe life is what you make of it. And I’m sick of talking about it… Step outside your comfort zone and get out of the ‘poor me’ mentality.”

“I got a lot out of [Mirrors],” said one woman, “but I really want to do Shakespeare tonight.” We all agreed and moved on with our plan to run 1.2 straight into 1.1, and then 1.3, to make sure we liked that flow on its feet as well as we had in our heads last week.

The woman reading Orsino got a little tripped up on the language as she entered for 1.1 and said we needed to start over. One of the women asked if the sailors and musicians could be played by the same people, who wouldn’t leave the stage between scenes. I agreed that that was a really funny idea and asked if we could see what happened if they left the stage only for a moment before realizing they shouldn’t have exited. Our first go at that was pretty funny, and Orsino’s reading was much stronger, but she still got stuck a few beats in and asked if we could reset again.

Since we’d gotten a bit further into the scene, those of us who were watching had started to get some ideas of more possibilities. We’d really loved a couple of moments when the musicians’ movements either mirrored or followed Orsino’s, and we asked them to play that up a bit more. In our third go at the scene, the musicians refused to stop playing and followed very close behind Orsino; at one point, they formed what looked like a caterpillar and made us all burst out laughing. At the same time, the woman reading Curio declined to have any sense of humor, finally wedging herself physically between the musicians and her boss. This led to very dry (and hilarious) delivery of her line, “Will you go hunt, my lord?”. The musician closest to her then began to play her “violin” right in her face. When the scene ended, we erupted in applause, continuing to laugh and shout out feedback with a ton of enthusiasm.

And we really liked staging the scenes in this order. “It works better because then you understand what Orsino’s going through,” said one woman, “because if you go 1.1 to 1.2, he just looks like a raving lunatic.” “He is!” responded another woman to more peals of laughter. There was unanimous agreement on this count as well as others: the plot points are clearer, it’ll be easier logistically, and we think the energy will feel better overall.

One of the women shared her idea of using cloth backdrops. The men’s ensemble has done that, though at WHV we’ve only ever used flats—which led to some sadness about the idea of painting over the gorgeous Macbeth flats… which led to the hilarious idea of having one of those flats make a surprise appearance in this show! And perhaps Lady Macbeth somehow ends up on stage when Malvolio gets his letter. Let’s just say that there have been so many ridiculous ideas for Macbeth tie-ins that I’m not sure we can—or should—avoid them at this point!

We put Act I, scene iii, on its feet, with two pretty new members reading Maria and Sir Toby. I hadn’t seen where Sir Andrew had gone, and it struck me that she might be hiding in the lectern that lives on stage. She wasn’t—moments later she came stumbling in and fell flat on her face (on purpose)—but the idea launched me backstage to sort of inventory what else we could potentially use in performance. There was quite a bit that had potential… We’ll see what ends up coming in handy!

While I was back there, Sir Andrew sneezed on the line, “Bless you, fair shrew!” and ended the scene by doing the robot, both of which caused the rest of the ensemble to completely lose it. When the scene ended, one woman said, “If she’d’ve done a cartwheel, it would have been over for us!” As we talked through some great ideas people had, someone remarked that things seemed to be popping up pretty organically. As a longtime member scribbled down these ideas in the designated notebook, she quietly said, “It’s not that hard of a play.” Hearing that, I immediately said, “Louder!” She put down her pen, rolled her eyes, shouted, “It’s not that hard of a play!” and sank back into her chair, grinning and continuing to write.

We ended the session with “This Bottle is Not a Bottle,” a Theatre of the Oppressed game. In the variation I chose, the group stands in a circle. The first person holds up an object—we used a pen—and says, “This pen is not a pen. It’s a _____,” and then they pass the object to the next person, who has to briefly interact with the object as if it is what was suggested. This repeats till every person has had a turn.

Our pen became…

A mustache

A top hat

A sword

A microphone

A balloon

A rock

An angry cobra

Cinderella’s slipper

A cane

A snorkel

A fish

A mini anti-gravity machine

Tap shoes

Although most ensemble members were a bit timid (which is not a bad thing), we all had a lot of fun. Just as the Mirrors exercise felt more comfortable than comedic improv, so did this one. “You couldn’t really think about it. You just had to do it,” said one woman. Another agreed, adding that it required us to be compassionate. “I don’t know,” said a quiet member, smiling at the woman who’d handed the pen to her. “You gave me a microphone.”

For round two, we used a notepad. It became…

A frisbee

A hockey puck

A hair comb

A tray of hot cookies

A mirror

A steering wheel

A kangaroo

A black hole

A machine to blow bubbles in space

A kitty

An envelope full of marbles

Your 15-year-old’s diary

A magic carpet

We definitely loosened up more in this round! The woman who was given a kangaroo took a pretty wild ride, that 15-year-old’s diary was quite shocking, and when I was given a kitty, I took it right to a longtime member with a professed horror of cats, causing her to hide behind someone else as we all cracked up.

“We definitely got more creative that time,” said one woman. I asked why she thought that was. “The objects were more active!” another piped up. The consensus was that this game is a winner—so much so that we’re going to make it a regular warm up! It really is a great exercise for this particular ensemble: a gentle warm up for our brains and bodies, in a circle, with no pressure.

As we left, a newer member paused to chat with Matt and Emma. “You know,” she said, “this is what I look forward to all day. If I had to miss chow, I’d be here, hungry, and happy!”

Friday / November 23
Written by Matt

“I get excited for Shakespeare!” exclaimed one of our new members. The programs building was pretty empty on the day after Thanksgiving, but we circled up on the stage. Holidays are always hard for our members, but a few of the women wanted to give the program some love! “People are always asking about it,” said another new member, “like, ‘You going to Shakespeare again?’ I’m like, ‘Yeah, I have fun over there!”

We started today with a repeat of Tuesday night’s activity: the Theatre of the Oppressed game This Bottle is Not a Bottle. One of the things we noticed on Tuesday was that the objects grew more interactive—and the “performances” became more active—the more times we did the game. Today, we continued that trend. Among the evening’s highlights were:


A raccoon (which turned into…)

An orangutan (which turned into…)

A screaming 2-year-old (“Oh, nooooooooooo!”)

A ticking time-bomb

A drag-racing car

A dentist’s drill (yikes!)

A superhero cape (“Man, this just makes me feel like a poser!”)

A defective curling iron

A wet cat

A waterfall (in your hands?!)

And a jetski

Feeling a little loosened up, we played an absurd game, called “Twizzle,” in which all but one member of the ensemble are walking in a circle. The one standing aside, who leads the game, calls out commands, which the others must follow exactly or they are “out.” The commands all involve moving (“walk,” “stop,” “jump,” “turn,” and the eponymous “twizzle,” which is a jump with a 360-degree turn). There’s an element of Simon Says to this game, since the leader (called the “Joker”) can call out other words that are non-commands (“go” or “freeze”) or order combinations of movements in quick succession (“jump, twizzle, twizzle, turn”).

Frannie led the first round, which ended pretty quickly, as we were just getting used to the rules of the game. The second time, though, the Joker was immediately calling combinations and, cruelly, saying things like “sizzle” and “bump” to try to catch us out. It worked. By the end, we were more than ready to get back into the play.

This was our third or fourth attempt at putting Act I scenes iv-v on their feet, and they’ve consistently given us trouble. Frannie played the over-the-top duke Orsino, and a new member volunteered to play Viola, who is dressed as Cesario. Valentine and Curio, who are in Orsino’s employ, were also played by new members. The scene moved quickly, but it felt a little “off”—it always has. We did get one good tidbit out of it, though: one of the women thought that Valentine might be jealous of Orsino. We mulled over the comic possibilities of that situation for a few minutes before moving on.

The final scene of Act I is long, complicated, and wordy. We soldiered through it, but there were some real highlights. Sir Toby was hilarious—everyone was laughing out loud—and Feste, whose wordplay drives the first half of the scene, was played by a woman who joined us last year and would definitely not have been playing a smart-aleck jester back then!

Our Olivia struggled a bit with the language as she read, which was a challenge, given that she is onstage for nearly the entire scene. But, in as fitting a metaphor for this season as any, everyone came together to help her through this tough scene, and it worked! At the end, after I (playing Viola/Cesario) had just walked off, a longtime member said, “You know how we were talking about how we can feel sympathy for people even though it’s a comedy? You made me feel sorry for Orsino. Like, ‘Farewell, fair cruelty!’ I felt sorry for him!” Another member, new this year added, “Yeah, I also felt sorry for Orsino.”

When Frannie talked about the difficulty of cutting this scene, that same woman affirmed that some of the wordplay is important to retain so we can see the different personalities interacting. “It’s really important for the characters,” she said. It’s great that people who may have had little or no familiarity with Shakespeare’s plays, characters, or language already feel this type of ownership over the work. They have opinions, and they’re going to be heard!